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hawkwing_lb) wrote2005-10-11 10:55 pm
hawkwing_lb) wrote2005-10-11 10:55 pm
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Progress notes, Tuesday October 11:
New words: 555, approx.
Total words: uh, dunno. About 3,000?
Draft of short story 'The Names of God' is done. Handwritten, so I don't know how many words it has. Now all that remains is to fix it.
It's broken, I'm pretty sure of it. I'm not sure how, but since this is a story where I still haven't figured out what it's about, that's no surprise.
I don't know how to fix it, either.
*solicits readers willing to critique*
Favourite sentence: In light that moved like treacle, the statue opened gold eyes.
New words: 555, approx.
Total words: uh, dunno. About 3,000?
Draft of short story 'The Names of God' is done. Handwritten, so I don't know how many words it has. Now all that remains is to fix it.
It's broken, I'm pretty sure of it. I'm not sure how, but since this is a story where I still haven't figured out what it's about, that's no surprise.
I don't know how to fix it, either.
*solicits readers willing to critique*
Favourite sentence: In light that moved like treacle, the statue opened gold eyes.